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I Did It
Contributed by
hoping_to_be_Me
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Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 01:25:00 AM in AEST
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I crawled out from the pain
you life me it
I crawled back to you
I said all the things
you said to say
I said enough
I know how you love
being in control
but it's killing
I know how you love
to watch me beg
so here I am
I changed all the things
you said to change
I'm begging, on my knees
I just want out
I'm stuck inside of this
waitng from something else
waiting to exist
I beg for your help
help for everything I've missed
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2003-03-31 01:25:00]
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Re: I Did It
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by karoody on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 01:43:58 AM AEST
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| i totllly understand your feelings. good write. |
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Re: I Did It
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by Percursors on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 12:30:04 PM AEST
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| we've all been there...great poem... |
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Re: I Did It
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 01:47:45 PM AEST
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Yep, I know how you feel. Great write. Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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