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pseudo with love
Contributed by
hungarianhaze
on
Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 06:59:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Ir relative to her conjured emotion
Unresponsive to my bearing demise
She asks he self " why, why him?"
Her scent, her kiss miraged with death
The bitter question he asks him self
Is she the one to take my breath?
Is she to take the black marbled walls
Turn them to ecstasy with humbling abyss
My heart skips with her sight in triune
Love transformed me, is she mine?
My dreamy thoughts, crystallized with coated spite
But it wasnt meant to be
my heart inteded to immense cries
The baron she is, keen to self resilience
Kill me now, this pain must end
kill me now, I live saturated in albatross
hyperbolic in her anger
Fate lied
The autumn leaves reflect off the summer gaze
A fresh start sparks from the autumn breeze
love will find your way
Love will smile upon you at the end of every day
I will compose my self and reminisce in my current exhaustion
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hungarianhaze
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2009-09-03 18:59:07]
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Re: pseudo with love
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 07:25:29 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feeling, welcome to ypdc:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: pseudo with love
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 4th September 2009 @ 01:06:49 PM AEST
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How wonderfully FULL this is! Your metaphors are incredible
and your word choices are perfection. It breathes and builds
until the heart implodes from pure, unrestrained emotion.
DAMN! Your talent surely shines in this piece. I will be
looking to your page again. I truly adore that last stanza.
Beautiful work ~
~ Breezy
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Re: pseudo with love
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by longhaircg on
Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 06:13:06 AM AEST
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WOW, so beautifully writen, I felt your every word. keep writing I will be looking for more.
sp |
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Re: pseudo with love
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by emystar on
Sunday, 26th December 2010 @ 09:13:41 PM AEST
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Your writing leaves speechless>>>>>>
Blessings,
emy |
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