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Letters to Alhena - Sonata #1
Contributed by
poluxthefifth
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Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 04:58:21 PM in AEST
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And your lips rained upon me.
I was dancing, so still, inmerse in a poem.
Horde of fairies to bring me water
You the heavens, you my wings.
Will, this time, time have no end?
For I want this your rain fall eternal.
You the earth, and the moon is your servant.
I the sea, made from kisses you rained.
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2009-09-03 16:58:21]
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Re: Letters to Alhena - Sonata #1
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by elle on
Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 05:13:43 PM AEST
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Nice. . . I love the last line
"I the sea, made from kisses you rained."
Lovely. . . elle :) |
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Re: Letters to Alhena - Sonata #1
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 06:11:37 PM AEST
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Oh, I am SO with elle on that last line. How exquisitely beautiful.
There is a poetic power just in that one line alone, but when coupled
with the rest ... your readers will be lost to sighs.
Magnificent.
~ Breezy
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