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The Real Me

Contributed by vr2776 on Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 04:17:30 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

In Silence I stay for I know, that
if my feelings I reveal for certain
the real me would show

What’s wrong with showing
the real me
Why am I so afraid of what
others will see

A fear that no one will like me for
who I really am
How could they, when I myself
don’t understand

So I will continue to dissemble
And keep the façade going
For it’s gone on so long that
I don’t even know what I'm doing

I've changed, maneuvered and
camouflaged my life so well
That I myself the real me can
No longer tell

But as I think back on when I was
really who I was meant to be
I sit here so confused because
I can’t remember, I can’t see

See the time when I actually
knew who I was
I try and try but its like my
whole life was a blur

When will I know for sure
What and who will I be at the end
The end of all the this not knowing
And playing pretend

God I can only call out to you for help
Please Lord help me find me
Help me find my true self.

Copyright Â© vr2776 ... [ 2009-09-03 16:17:30]
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Re: The Real Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 06:23:09 PM AEST
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Very emotional write. I feel the frustration and anxiety building up
to the very last verse in a plea for answers. Sometimes a bit of quiet
reflecting helps. And of course, writing. It's good that you can express
yourself in verse. Take care ~

~ Breezy

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