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That girl you said
Contributed by
CMkelly
on
Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 12:08:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I’m the leaf that blew far too far
I’m the truth between your every scar
I’m the wave when you want calm
I’m the one that caused you harm
You’re the one that gave me joy
You’re the one, the only boy
You’re the one I really need
You’re the one I can lead
I could make you cry with pain
Or kiss you carelessly in the rain
I could make you angry, hot like fire
And still fulfil your every desire
I’m the fear killing you dead
I’m the hope inside your head
I’m that girl, that girl, you said.
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CMkelly
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2009-09-03 12:08:16] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: That girl you said
(User Rating: 1 ) by kye on
Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 04:21:42 PM AEST (User
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I liked your rhyming. The girl in your poem sounds manipulative yet, interesting.
I loved LOVED your opening "I'm the leaf that blew far too far"---that just captured me.
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