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Passion Revived
Contributed by
BlackBearExtraordinaire
on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 09:09:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Today's the day that I'll say goodbye
To all their nonsense and all thier lies
I'll fnally put behind me the things I most regret
And all the things I'm ashamed of, I can now forget
For there is something new in me, a fire I've not known
And it burns fear, singes doubt, and hates to be alone
It mends my heart, heals my soul, cauterizes wounds
And has the strength and will to burn: forests, cities, and moons
And it wants company for me, yours if truth me told
And without your touch it weakens and I can feel the cold
So, please, hold me close, so that I may burn bright
And with your magic kiss, we'll set fire to the night
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Re: Passion Revived
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 09:16:48 PM AEST (User
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Hey, I love the flow in this...and I love what it says... Nicely done...
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Re: Passion Revived
(User Rating: 1 ) by Adder on
Wednesday, 2nd September 2009 @ 05:29:53 AM AEST (User
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...beautifully crafted piece...the words...the flow...wonderful...
~RJD~ |
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