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eyes of you
Contributed by
orphani
on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 04:03:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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EyE................................... S......of you
pierced,
( pineneedleazuredreams )
..... thatautumnleft
........................................................ a
.................................................. s c a r e c r o w
sharp.......................................
blackblackblack...................... formless
crows ................................. (once flesh)
disembleme
apumkin field
................................................................................................... empty with children
Copyright ©
orphani
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2009-09-01 16:03:43]
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Re: eyes of you
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 04:15:22 PM AEST
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creative and clever,
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: eyes of you
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 08:29:07 PM AEST
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Interesting poem, this style is unique, I have never seen it before until you showed it!
I like!
Have a good night!
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: eyes of you
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by Adder on
Wednesday, 2nd September 2009 @ 05:19:47 AM AEST
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...may i say this poem is brilliant...well done...
~RJD~ |
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