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precious love
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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~*~
The little brook trickles
and runs into a stream,
love makes you happy
so in all of your dreams,
~*~
You see that special face
and your heart is content,
the stream flows into a
river, and it turns and bends,
~*~
This will never have closure
your love and you knowing,
complete soul exposure
always moving and flowing,
~*~
Oh oh something is changing
something then one fateful day,
as the river meets the sea
will precious love flow away?
~*~
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ladyfawn
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Re: precious love
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by venkat on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 01:56:27 AM AEST
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| for all the murmering rivers final peace is in the boundless joy of the sea...yes the breast of sea is the place for their solace .. venkat |
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Re: precious love
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by Ronald on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 03:31:50 AM AEST
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| Hey, this poem is so wonderful. Makes me ponder a little while. Good work pal. |
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Re: precious love
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 06:13:03 AM AEST
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| Perhaps the little brook is just the beginning, and the sea is the ultimate depth of love ... I can only hope ... and also wish that you find that sea with the one you love too ... Jan |
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Re: precious love
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by Dot on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 10:09:31 AM AEST
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| Lady fawn, this poem is full of love from your heart- may this love last forever. Dot |
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Re: precious love
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 10:15:44 AM AEST
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I so loved this write very beautiful,well said!
Christina |
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Re: precious love
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 01:40:21 PM AEST
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"complete soul exposure"
Love that! Great job! Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: precious love
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by Tanna on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 09:31:18 AM AEST
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| This is beautiful Nessa :) |
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Re: precious love
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by wolfflow on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 03:49:09 PM AEST
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| *smiles*, did'nt think you understood, apologies, but in ways you were one step ahead of me, *silly smiles*, big love to you, lets make some waves babe |
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Re: precious love
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by Ramfire on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 09:26:51 AM AEST
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Very nice write. I like the part that goes like this: "You see that special face
and your heart is content,"
Our love can always be with us - just have to close our eyes and we see that person.
Ramfire |
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Re: precious love
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Thursday, 3rd April 2003 @ 05:37:06 PM AEST
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| i like this poem ... the analogy works so well |
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Re: precious love
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by nikkie on
Thursday, 10th April 2003 @ 08:44:46 PM AEST
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| I like this poem...its beautiful really it is!! Nikkie |
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Re: precious love
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 11:05:56 PM AEST
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great write dear ladyfawn, i truely enjoyed every word...
Lindsey |
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Re: precious love
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by LadyDama on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 08:19:16 AM AEST
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| ohhh... i love this... precious write... with a little sadness... blessings... michele |
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Re: precious love
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by Searcher on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 02:46:28 PM AEST
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Great write
Very meaningful
definitely a winner |
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Re: precious love
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by Alovinmann on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 04:12:07 PM AEST
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| great sweet thought provoking |
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Re: precious love
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 2nd September 2020 @ 11:48:59 PM AEST
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So visual....I love this.
Very happy to read you tonight. |
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