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A Summer Suicide
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 02:20:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My emotions are shattered
How much longer?
Too much pain, inner turmoil
I wanna see through you
the way you can't see me anymore
Why don't you see me anymore?
I'm alone
with a bag full of pills
and a mind full of suicide
like a sedative
to my over anxious heart
My self hate
that you help me create.
I am dreams and danger
I let you hurt the deepest parts of me
Couldn't be all I wanted
perhaps, I wanted too much
Insomnia playing on my fears
your words driving me to tears.
Whispers of No, it's not your time yet
my blood is damaged
my sense of self (crumbling away)
Fallen footsteps.
Love, I love you
words become obscure, unreadable
you look at me like another day
Summer's swallowed whole
Copyright ©
Inevitable
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2009-09-01 14:20:32]
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Re: A Summer Suicide
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by razorbladekisses on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 02:55:43 PM AEST
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Very strong. I enjoyed this poem.
It's quite sad though.. I hope things get better.
Much love,
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Re: A Summer Suicide
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 08:31:48 PM AEST
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I most times wont even read a poem about suicide as its a very touchy subject with me.
This is full of emotion and such hurt. I hope it gets better for you soon........
the last two lines were so solid and they gave me shivers, very powerful.
Michelle |
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Re: A Summer Suicide
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd September 2009 @ 08:22:16 AM AEST
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Very powerful writing. Your poems leave a lasting imprint on the reader and that's rare on this site.
-Phil |
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Re: A Summer Suicide
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by Mrmatt on
Thursday, 3rd September 2009 @ 03:46:31 AM AEST
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| Absence, a disconection, and emotion. IF life is terribly short lived by a summer swallowed you bleed through your writting. A chord well strumed absolute greatness. Live and grieve good luck to you! |
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