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Remit
Contributed by
navydocny
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Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 09:48:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I await welcoming warmth of Hell
Rather an icy dead love swoon
Warmth of fires stoked not of want
Tribute to Perdition a strained détente
None for wanting a soulless clutch last
Gorging ourselves on brazen fast
Toiling to remit a painful assess
Always in search of a path to redress
But as Hell’s warmth will draw me away
I’ll hope that she will forgive me one day
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navydocny
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2009-09-01 09:48:45]
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Re: Remit
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by spud on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 10:03:24 AM AEST
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Hi there,
I had 13 years in the Royal Navy. Can relate to
the subject content of your poem. Didn't have
the answer then, and alas, don't have the answer
now. Hang in there, pal. You're in an awful place.
(not that you need to be told that).
Tommy
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Re: Remit
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 10:24:15 AM AEST
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Steve, it's so good to see you are still posting, though I see not a lot has changed.
I'm so sorry for all you must endure, especially given the circumstance of where
you are. I know you have been hoping and praying for a long time now. I wish it
were easier for you. This piece is painful, but creatively and beautifully written.
I hope it is somewhat therapeutic for you at least.
Be well and take care, my friend.
~ Breezy
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Re: Remit
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 10:45:41 AM AEST
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so very sad, it drips of loneliness, surely there is something of beauty where you are, something to warm your soul... may you always have a poem in your heart, and pen near your hand, your talent shines,
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Remit
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 12:16:05 PM AEST
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A sad poem on two fronts. However, negativity is the deadliest enemy of all. Remain positive and you can make all these sad poems happy.
-Phil |
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Re: Remit
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by elle on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 05:31:35 PM AEST
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| Honoring valor & love in the same stroke of pen. Masterful! ~smiles~ elle |
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Re: Remit
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 08:39:50 PM AEST
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Steve,
this is so sad, a battle on two fronts per say.
I am so sorry that things haven't improved for you. Hang in there ya just never know.......
Hugs you tight
please be safe
Michelle
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Re: Remit
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by Xjordanary on
Wednesday, 2nd September 2009 @ 12:47:45 AM AEST
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This is a very emotional and deep write. It saddens me but to the fantastic
use of words i say bravo, and would gladly read on. |
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Re: Remit
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by Loende on
Wednesday, 2nd September 2009 @ 05:13:31 PM AEST
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Dearest, Steve...
You face this so bravely, my friend. Would that
we could ease the suffering. Just know, that
we suffer with you. Another fantastic piece.
Be well,
~dawn |
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