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So thats It
Contributed by
Tiffyo4
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Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 05:49:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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So thats it this is how it ends
you just walk away like everyone else
did you even care about me or were you lieing
smiling in my face only to turn your back on me
in the end you got what you wanted
me unhappy and you smiling in my face
everything i thought i knew is gone now
my heart ripped from my chest only to hit the ground
i hope you know you hurt me dearly
and now i want to die all over again
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Tiffyo4
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2009-08-31 17:49:20]
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Re: So thats It
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by lesoleilnoire on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 07:26:13 PM AEST
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Nice piece so full of emotion. I am sorry about the pain you are going through.
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Re: So thats It
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by shelby on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 09:14:52 PM AEST
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Your verse of pain, very well written.
I am sorry for your pain though.
People are cruel, remember they lack within themselves that is why they hurt others.
You are better, deserve better.
Hugs
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Re: So thats It
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 02:41:24 PM AEST
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| I feel this way about some of the people that I met though in the end it turns out that i was just being paranoid. Anyway, great write! |
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