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Search For Love
Contributed by
JRLatin77
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Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 12:50:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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We search for love but never we find,
Distance the heart away from the mind.
Sometimes we seek what others say seek
Ignoring the heart when it wishes to speak
Cease the moments, that touches your heart
It knows when to dance, and smile from the start
This light will illume you, and easier to find
So the one, to love you, no longer, be blind.
By JRLatin77
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JRLatin77
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2009-08-31 12:50:01]
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Re: Search For Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 01:40:24 PM AEST
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There is a lot of emotion and thought packed into this tiny little verse. And it
is powerful in its voice. The last two lines especially draw my attention. What
you are saying is that what you send out, you reap, yes? Love and love comes
back to you. (And an accurate illustration it is.)
Well written and beautifully done. But the message is what I feel most in this. ^_^
~ Breezy |
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Re: Search For Love
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by shelby on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 02:51:51 PM AEST
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This is very beautiful, it has a nice flow to it as well.
Have a super day
Michelle |
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