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So Goes It
Contributed by
spike
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Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 06:06:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I took the chance to follow,
but love just left me hollow
—rejected me.
So I partnered up with anger,
because that one likes to linger
—consumed me.
Now the tide of red has settled
and bitterness has rattled,
while loneliness has reduced me
to maudlin opportunity
—ainsi va la vie.
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spike
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2009-08-31 06:06:59]
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Re: So Goes It
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 07:27:32 AM AEST
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Impressive!!!!
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Re: So Goes It
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by purplestary on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 10:15:59 AM AEST
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| nice...love the subject line too..it somehow adds to the peice..lol. great write. |
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Re: So Goes It
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by shelby on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 11:28:17 AM AEST
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Powerful and so emotive, I hope you are ok?
I loved the pic with it too!
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: So Goes It
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 02:30:23 PM AEST
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beautifully written, both title and poem are solid and strong...
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: So Goes It
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 04:55:56 PM AEST
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I know when I read your poems that they are guaranteed to be quality. This was superb. Passionate, emotive, stunning.
-Phil |
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