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Time – Part II
Contributed by
Fudge
on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 09:56:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Time it was brought us apart,
And time it was that made the past.
Time it was not on our side,
And time it was we were deprived.
Time took all these things from me,
Time took them as if they were free.
But time’s not free nor is my heart
As time it was brought up apart.
Copyright ©
Fudge
... [
2003-03-30 21:56:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Time – Part II
(User Rating: 1 ) by banjo on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 12:44:42 PM AEST (User
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what are all these things? let the reader in. typo: up should be us.
rhyme gets lost when disconnected from meter. count syllables. |
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