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Pumpkin
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Saturday, 29th August 2009 @ 09:05:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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mystical orange ball,
magically a face appears,
superstitious stare
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-08-29 09:05:03]
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Re: Pumpkin
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by elle on
Saturday, 29th August 2009 @ 09:08:35 AM AEST
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| This season's coming up fast here. Cool write. elle :) |
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Re: Pumpkin
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by Voice of the Silent on
Saturday, 29th August 2009 @ 10:55:27 AM AEST
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Great poem but I didn't at first think halloween I thought of sleepy hallow the headless horsemen or some other folklore where a horseman with a pumpkin head would throw it at you and as it came it would engulf itself with the flames of hell, I think if a pumpkin came at me baring with it the fire of hell I could only watch mesmerized by it's stare
great poem, made me think...I want to carve one now :)
hope to read more soon
-Kelly |
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Re: Pumpkin
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by Voice of the Silent on
Saturday, 29th August 2009 @ 10:55:49 AM AEST
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Great poem but I didn't at first think halloween I thought of sleepy hallow the headless horsemen or some other folklore where a horseman with a pumpkin head would throw it at you and as it came it would engulf itself with the flames of hell, I think if a pumpkin came at me baring with it the fire of hell I could only watch mesmerized by it's stare
great poem, made me think...I want to carve one now :)
hope to read more soon
-Kelly |
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Re: Pumpkin
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by Eclipse_of_the_Moon on
Saturday, 29th August 2009 @ 11:52:46 PM AEST
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| simple, short, sweet. very nice poem and that is basically what a pumpkin is. |
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Re: Pumpkin
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by ming on
Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 09:01:36 AM AEST
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| Love the season, love the write. :) Thanks for this, it makes me want to write of this time of year also. |
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