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YOU CAN TAKE IT ALL 'CEPT MY SANITY
Contributed by
emystar
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Saturday, 29th August 2009 @ 02:54:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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You can dog me out
spit in my face
leaving nothing of luv
Not even a trace.
You can take it all
'cept my sanity-
bind me in your spell
for the world to see.
Take it all 'cept my sanity.
You can spit your
hatred right at me,
dog my very reason
to live-n-be-
Take it all 'cept my sanity.
There's nothing else
you can do or say
as luv just withers
wasting away.
Copyright © emystar ...
Monday, June 24 2002 @ 14:26:03 AEST
Copyright ©
emystar
... [
2009-08-29 02:54:29] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: YOU CAN TAKE IT ALL 'CEPT MY SANITY
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mrmatt on
Saturday, 29th August 2009 @ 03:42:24 PM AEST (User
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I feel your pain in this, I can feel the defence that has been thrown up to save a peice that cannot be taken away |
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Re: YOU CAN TAKE IT ALL 'CEPT MY SANITY
(User Rating: 1 ) by JakerBaker88 on
Sunday, 7th February 2010 @ 10:26:33 PM AEST (User
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I felt your pain and sadness when reading this. These are some strong lyrics. Loved the imagery and the message in it. Good work. |
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