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IN THESE TROUBLED TIMES YOUR LUV WILL SHINE
Contributed by
emystar
on
Saturday, 29th August 2009 @ 02:39:13 AM in AEST
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Someone beat him to death
for his car.
Left him cold-n-alone
out there.
No remorse for their
evil deed.
Oh God, my troubled
heart bleeds.
Jesus, oh my Jesus, sweet Jesus
in these troubled times----
your lite will shine.
A sacrificial lamb
went to heaven
your lite to shine
in these troubled times.
Folks are snapping
tottally out of control.
No thought of sorrow
or their troubled soul.
Insanity is running wild.
We're all your child,
Oh god!
They killed him for
a material thing.
Now tell me
Was that sane?
How can one be so
evil-n-cold
no thought for life
nor their soul.
Copyright © emystar ...
Monday, June 24 2002 @ 16:02:23 AEST
Copyright ©
emystar
... [
2009-08-29 02:39:13]
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Re: IN THESE TROUBLED TIMES YOUR LUV WILL SHINE
(User Rating: 1 )
by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 08:07:34 PM AEST
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| That sounds like it should be a rock band lyric!...Troubled times indeed. I'll check out some more. |
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Re: IN THESE TROUBLED TIMES YOUR LUV WILL SHINE
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by JakerBaker88 on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 10:46:04 AM AEST
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| I agree with the previous comment. This would make a very good rock n' roll ballad. I also loved your message of how we are all God's children etc. It really makes the reader reflect on themselves and what is important. Good job here! Take care. =) |
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Re: IN THESE TROUBLED TIMES YOUR LUV WILL SHINE
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by Jay23 on
Saturday, 1st May 2010 @ 07:16:06 PM AEST
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| I love this. I like how it sounds like it should be a song and the gods children thing is the perfect touch. |
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