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You Never Loved Me
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Saturday, 29th August 2009 @ 12:38:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You never loved me
Thoughts infected, a corpse dissected,
Pain so strong, it won’t be long,
Again Heartbreak, tears vacate,
Emotions show, another critical blow,
When will it stop, love is blocked,
Alone again, scars within,
Visible pain, you’re to blame,
Turn away, tears fall like rain,
Why you ask, do I wear this mask?
“It’s not you, it’s always me,”
When will I be loved and my heart find wings,
Alone and fading, heart-broke and waiting,
Kiss with lips… laced with poison,
Soul dies, grown men cry,
Sun sets, but no moon takes flight,
Stars don’t shine, its dark this night,
I rest alone, a bed so cold,
Dwell on the past, relationships that never last,
Give away my heart, only to have it torn apart,
Leave me be………. You never loved me!
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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2009-08-29 00:38:27]
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Re: You Never Loved Me
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by emystar on
Saturday, 29th August 2009 @ 01:00:54 AM AEST
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Oh friend,
this is so sad. I hope it's just good writing and not truth considering where you are. Any time would be sad but now would just be horrible.
You still have us dear.
big huggs, prayer, blessings, safty,
emy |
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Re: You Never Loved Me
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by LadyRose on
Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 11:19:34 AM AEST
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| I feel your pain with every word...... |
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Re: You Never Loved Me
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by InfinitePoet on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 01:59:52 AM AEST
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Teriffic!!! Very great way of expressing your pain,your loneliness,but also your intelligent enough to use your experiences with pain and drama in your life to bring your poetry to life!! It's weird that we draw from the negativity that surrounds ud rather than the positivity,to fuel our creativity and bring out the poet in us!! Hey!! Whatever works!! Your doinf fine!!
Keep Posting and Sharing!!
Peace& HUgz,
Dana |
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Re: You Never Loved Me
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by shelby on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 11:31:39 AM AEST
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I mirror Emy, I also hope this is good writing and nothing really taking place, it is hard to be where you are and have this sort of distration and heartache.
Very sad, please pm me and let me know you are ok??
Hugs you and be careful please
Michelle |
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Re: You Never Loved Me
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 02:15:55 PM AEST
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this is sooo beautifully written, though now i worry for you, are you alright my friend? im here if you need to talk, keep writing, though sad this is one of your best!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: You Never Loved Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 07:49:49 AM AEST
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Such irrepressible pain . Devastating to an emotional heart. I feel the anguish with
every word. In this day and age, disposable relationships are the norm. Your words
hold so much despair and little hope, it breaks the heart just to read. And there is
little anyone can do to repair the damage. Only time. Be well ...
~ Breezy
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