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The Eternal Quest
Contributed by
sojourner
on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 09:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I'll bring you not a rose
to brighten your day
I'll bring you my love
please,don't throw it away
I'll bring you not the stars
that shine in the sky
For if you love me
you'll see them shine, in my eyes
I'll bring you not the world
to lie at your feet
For to have you love me
would be a greater feat
Copyright ©
sojourner
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2003-03-30 21:25:00]
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Re: The Eternal Quest
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 09:39:56 PM AEST
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excellent...Craig was right you are very talented.
Sharon |
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Re: The Eternal Quest
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 09:42:13 PM AEST
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this is so true...
your poem is beautiful:)
hugs nessa |
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Re: The Eternal Quest
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 09:48:29 PM AEST
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| This is so very beautiful. |
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Re: The Eternal Quest
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by Fudge on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 10:03:20 PM AEST
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| very sweet, very nice. keep posting more poems! |
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Re: The Eternal Quest
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 01:36:58 PM AEST
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Beautiful!! Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: The Eternal Quest
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by spooky on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 08:16:41 PM AEST
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well written piece,and very touching,,
keep them coming uncle butch,,,,a friend in words,,spooky,,craig |
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Re: The Eternal Quest
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 01:31:49 AM AEST
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Beautifully written
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Re: The Eternal Quest
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by xXIronSharpensIronXx on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 04:55:53 PM AEST
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| A male poet... I know there's lots, but it's still strangely encouraging. Haha... do you have any idea how sexy you are? |
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Re: The Eternal Quest
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by jmakuer on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 02:32:39 AM AEST
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| good job well writen..and i know i could say thesame and related to it..you are so talented and all i could say is that keep your head up..and blessed be..jojo |
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