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This is How Love Feels
Contributed by
beautiful_letdowns
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Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 12:04:34 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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There’s nothing like a broken heart
That’s stitched together so tight
Forgiveness given to the undeserving
When everything seems all but right
A peace that moves me
With a story that heals
A dream I have never known
That this is how love feels
With the world crashing around
Unemployed, broke, and alone
Once a shaken mess of nerves
Now unafraid of the unknown
Life throws its hardballs
That I don’t think I can chase
But with love and only love
There’s nothing I can’t face.
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2009-08-28 12:04:34]
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Re: This is How Love Feels
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 12:11:46 PM AEST
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i love the first and last stanzas esp.
"Forgiveness given to the undeserving"
this was a good write indeed.
take care
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Re: This is How Love Feels
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by LadyRose on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 01:10:45 PM AEST
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| I totally agree with you!!!!!! |
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Re: This is How Love Feels
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 08:20:06 PM AEST
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I see much hope within the sadness. You write with an ability to extract
an equity of emotion that makes this a very relatable and beautiful
piece of art. Well done, poet. The last verse is so full of light.
~ Breezy
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Re: This is How Love Feels
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 29th August 2009 @ 10:21:59 AM AEST
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"Life throws its hardballs
That I don’t think I can chase
But with love and only love
There’s nothing I can’t face."
How true this stanza is for so many. with love anything is possible. it brings to mind for me the song "so small" by Carrie Underwood. I absolutely love that song...and I love this poem. great write.
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