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Cheap Motels,Guitar and Wine
Contributed by
ChenoaShiningwater
on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 04:32:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Silver rain creates a mist, that veils all the stars
Still she knows they're shimmering,he promises they are
To dream upon and lay the heart,find a heavenly home
And so she does in silence,without him,all alone
Unspoken words ride the wind,to breathe against her face
Caressing tiny crystal tears,and holding them in place
Brimming in her eyes they feel,as though a warmer grace
Nearing in the moonlight,a memory,a taste
A silhouette across the sky,takes her thoughts away
She sees him standing by the moon,closer than the day
Drifting in her sorrow,she holds her heart in hand
And offers once again,herself unto this man
Across the darkest blue,over the waters secret depths
She sends a velvet kiss,to fall upon his naked chest
On a canvas made of moonlight,she lays her body bare
She paints a portrait of their love,the lunacy they share
Unspoken words ride the wind,to breathe against her face
Caressing tiny crystal tears,and holding them in place
Brimming in her eyes they feel,as though a warmer grace
Nearing in the moonlight,a memory,a taste
A taste of all the colours,the hues and rainbow smiles
The music that they danced to,loving all the while
Hidden by the hours,that seem to snatch away their time
She misses all those moments,cheap motels,guitar and wine
Copyright ©
ChenoaShiningwater
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2009-08-28 04:32:32]
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Re: Cheap Motels,Guitar and Wine
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by purplestary on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 08:24:22 AM AEST
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| wow. this was an amazing write. love the title. |
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Re: Cheap Motels,Guitar and Wine
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 08:39:17 PM AEST
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I remember this one...... as always it is devine!
Michelle |
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Re: Cheap Motels,Guitar and Wine
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 03:55:23 PM AEST
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| The imagery in this poem is stunning. Great poem! |
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Re: Cheap Motels,Guitar and Wine
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 02:50:29 PM AEST
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truly a delight to read, excellent images, beautiful...
hugs n' love nessa |
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