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Faded
Contributed by
ChenoaShiningwater
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Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 04:17:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Is nothing real,is love not sacred
Must a heart be left so cold and naked
After all the screams and pleas for warmth
Now the silence of darkness calls
Where are the flowers of my hearts song
Bright coloured petals,now long gone
Yet, if the night is hush and still
You can hear the cries,a lonesome trill
And of the soul,what meaning is there
To dream alone,with nobody to share
Solitude surrounds me upon these shores
But I do not cry,I weep no more
Merely I just sit and sigh
Watching lovers strolling by....
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ChenoaShiningwater
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2009-08-28 04:17:24]
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Re: Faded
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by elle on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 07:43:39 PM AEST
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| pondering & peaceful. . . nice combination. . . nice write. elle :) |
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Re: Faded
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 08:27:36 PM AEST
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aw, well this made me sad. As I read each line I find myself dwelling within
the verses. I am at a point where I am calm and safe in the knowledge of my
fate (or destiny). Sighing yes. But I understand being beyond the weeping ...
still though ... it makes me sad. Or maybe just a bit melancholy.
In any case, this was wonderfully written. Painful, but in such a beautiful
and gentle way.
~ Breezy
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Re: Faded
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 08:47:36 PM AEST
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It is painful and gentle as Rox said......
It could apply to other things beyond love as well.......
Then that moment of pondering and letting go but not with a tear just the sullen sighhhhh, I know it well.
Again beautiful verse
Michelle |
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Re: Faded
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by spud on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 04:46:35 AM AEST
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Hi Chen,
Anyone who can write like this, will never fade - nor
your understanding, nor your raison d'etre.
You're not alone - we hear you!
Tommy
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