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Motives
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 07:02:33 PM in AEST
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Greeting me with a forced smile,
I wonder how quickly your face will crack and fall in a pile.
Humans always have a motive for their "kind act".
Since when did all humanity lose its tact?
Telling me you like my shirt makes me go berserk.
If only you would admit to simply wanting life's perks.
Mirror, mirror, on the wall, who's the most fake human of them all?
Is it him?; No, it's her.; so many phonies making reality appalling.
Why ask me how I am today?
All you care about is your day.
Parasitic humanity feeds on the few good souls;
it is a contagion fastly growing out of control.
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lesoleilnoire
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Re: Motives
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by Voice of the Silent on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 07:50:41 PM AEST
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I've meet people like this, I've been like this but that was long ago...not everyone has there motives you have to be sure before you can say their motives, friends have been trying to find mine for years their still in the dark...I have none
I do like you Haiku's better but that's just me as for this though it is a great poem and I agree with you on it some people always have evil motives
hope to read more soon
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Re: Motives
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by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 08:29:40 PM AEST
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true...very true. but i believe there are genuinely kind people b/c thats who they are, and they dont fake it for any reason. but sum believe it feels good to be bad, wearing that "nice" mask behind it. its good u wrote this, its refreshing for my awareness...
take care
-K.Z. |
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