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Touch. Fall
Contributed by
jord
on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 01:15:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Breathe. Out. Mellow Knees.
Echo. Out. Broken. Trees.
Heart. Ache. Fall. Across.
Feeling. All. Feeling. Loss.
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jord
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2009-08-27 13:15:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Touch. Fall
(User Rating: 1 ) by rossdean on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 03:24:35 AM AEST (User
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lovely use of words, can relate to every word. when you suffer a loss your heart does ache and hurts with real pain. and i felt this reading your poem take care traceyxxxxxx |
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