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Crabs
Contributed by
charminglyawkward
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Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 12:29:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I remember the day
when you woke me
spoke me things that bought me sunshine
even if for only a little while
and in time, I
transfixed your shell with things that glisten
you talked some and I listened
ruled by the moon, we just walked the tides sideways
I'm sorry
it was never proper done
you and I were always pearls
that weren't quite ready to blossom
I always ask myself
if I'm allowed to miss you
is night stark naked and boring
where you wander too?
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charminglyawkward
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2009-08-27 12:29:38]
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Re: Crabs
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by ming on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 03:46:03 PM AEST
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| This IS charming! I felt myself transported to walking sideways along the moonshine. |
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Re: Crabs
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by InfinitePoet on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 06:30:12 PM AEST
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Bravo!! Nice write!!!
Peace & Hugz,
Dana |
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