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***Midnight # Magik***
Contributed by
ChenoaShiningwater
on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 02:30:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Last night in moonlight shadows,I cast a special spell
lotus incense,
3 rose petals,
and all my tears that fell
A snip of hair,
your photo,
a poem,
my love so true
Into a wooden bowl I placed, every memory of you
Strawberries and whipped cream,
some songs and your keys
Scooby Doo,
three stooges
and a painting done by me
Stardust from my dreams of you,
raindrops from the storms
Footprints from our walks,
embraces that kept me warm
Leaves of winters past
that blew across my feet
I picked them up one time when I was walking down the street
The same moment they appeared to me,I'd been thinking about you
So I saw this as sweet kharma,and wondered if you would too
Ash from the fireplace,where last winter's fire had been
Many nights it warmed us,everytime it was in dreams
Just one thing left to add,so sad it got that far
Yet this woman has no use for,a burnt out fallen star
So into the bowl with all the rest of you,and yesterday
I placed my fallen wishing star,
said goodbye ...
and walked away
Copyright ©
ChenoaShiningwater
... [
2009-08-27 02:30:23]
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Re: ***Midnight # Magik***
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by spud on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 02:49:07 AM AEST
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I don't know whether to laugh or cry at this one,
because this is one meticulous ''permanent''
goodbye!! A romantic 'springclean!'
Well crafted, Chen.
Tommy
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Re: ***Midnight # Magik***
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by shelby on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 04:36:18 PM AEST
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Oh this is delightful, very vivid in images.
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Re: ***Midnight # Magik***
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 04:02:17 AM AEST
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Sometimes all that's left is to walk away....sad .
You are and always have been the best poetess I have ever read.
Roses at your feet
Larry |
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