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If Time Could Talk
Contributed by
Xjordanary
on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 02:08:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Reminiscent of demise,
Green hair and deep red eyes,
Looking spoken in a world of wonder,
Man appears with gazing thunder,
Stars to fight, starts to conquer,
Doesnt rest, ingores the ponder,
Never is all said and done,
Never stay yet never run,
Abundant years of evolution,
One man dies, a revolution,
Still no rest, still no ponder,
2000 years, infinite blunder,
Now here, all the same,
Bloodshed land and death of rain,
Will we sit, will we stay,
If i ask, will time say?
It heals all wounds, but just one,
History, and whats to come.
Copyright ©
Xjordanary
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2009-08-27 02:08:05]
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Re: If Time Could Talk
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 07:52:40 AM AEST
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| Beautiful and very thoughtful poem! |
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Re: If Time Could Talk
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by spud on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 08:35:41 AM AEST
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Hi
A flowing account of timeless and endless
mistakes of Man. Will we ever learn, I wonder?
Can we ever learn???
Tommy
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Re: If Time Could Talk
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Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 09:45:32 AM AEST
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I liked it. It had depth and sincerity.
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Re: If Time Could Talk
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by InfinitePoet on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 06:46:30 PM AEST
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Very classy,with maturity in it's words!! Now I know i'm not alone when I too sit and ponder very similar topics!!
Peace& Hugz,
Dana |
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