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The Vines

Contributed by sugarshane on Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 01:02:35 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Bipolar is a name
They give individuals like me
Some people are diseased
Some are looking to get out of jail free

A perfect example is... well
We'll call him "Pat"
He raped a girl in Oregon
He met online in chat

He claims all this bull*****
And believe him they do
It amazes me how things work here
In the Red, White & Blue

I work my ass off every day
Guess what? No Doc!
But multiple stays in hospitals
for this malingering dope fiend crock

I struggle every day with my up's & my downs
I heard his daddy & step mom caught the first greyhound they found

They couldn't have got there faster if they were in a blimp
They showed up just in time with 48 Oz. & Jumbo Shrimp

He's being treated for "suicide"
Yet there are no visible signs
22 Miles away in Martinez
A man now hangs with the vines

Copyright © sugarshane ... [ 2009-08-26 13:02:35]
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Re: The Vines (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 09:33:29 PM AEST
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Good Ol VINE HILLIANS HUH!!!! What you know bout vine hill and the MTZ!! I'm from san pablo ca very close to there!! Yeah i know just what all the people in the vines are about!! Your description was excellent dope fiend crock!!! Great piece of poetry!! Keep writing and keep posting Neighbor!!! I hope you are talking about martinez calif!! if not i'll feel like an idiot!! Drop me a line or a comment 2 let me know if i was right!!!!
Peace & HUgz!
Dana

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