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The Heart
Contributed by
merle
on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 12:50:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The heart tis a complex creature,
men are born, die ignorant of its feature;
What seems evident is often contradiction,
Where lies truth, where begins fiction;
Navigate its channels, try its tide,
Ebb and flow, its currents seldom confide;
Mystery shrouds like fog, tis the hearts master,
Look through the mist in vain, pursue faster;
Circle the world, bridge the seas, cry in twilight,
Lovers repeat the eternal prayer tonight;
Protect the seekers, searchers, who the heart would tame,
Tis fraught with riches, replete with danger but worth the game
Merle Temple
MerleTemple.com
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merle
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2009-08-26 12:50:43]
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Re: The Heart
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 09:34:07 PM AEST
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Bravo poet! I am impressed. There is so much wisdom in this. I'm not
sure when I've read a more sagely piece. Yes, the heart is definitely
complex, but you've shed a tiny crease of light on it for us.
AMAZING last line!!
~ Breezy |
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Re: The Heart
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 09:42:11 AM AEST
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I'm not usually a fan of rhyming poems nowadays but this was exceptional. Creative language with carefully considered fluency. Great writing.
-Phil |
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