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~KiSsInG In ThE RaIn~
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 11:59:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Our reflections rippled softly
within the misty dew.
Lost inside your eyes,
I knew just what to do.
The summer wind it whispered
and I felt the want within.
The storm brought forth soft senses
lustful sighs soon to begin.
We melted in each others arms
loving the world away.
Rain swirling round us in currents
We kissed the moments away.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2009-08-25 23:59:33]
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Re: ~KiSsInG In ThE RaIn~
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by ChenoaShiningwater on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 12:08:17 AM AEST
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| Sweet n Sensual...Very Nice! |
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Re: ~KiSsInG In ThE RaIn~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 01:06:53 AM AEST
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I love this poem its very heart felt
and I bet will make any reader think
of how wonderful love is
Great job |
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Re: ~KiSsInG In ThE RaIn~
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by spud on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 04:58:55 AM AEST
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Hi,
Love this - says it all in a few words!
Rain? What rain??
Tommy
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Re: ~KiSsInG In ThE RaIn~
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by jenniferstein2006 on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 06:11:54 AM AEST
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| veryyy good indeed! |
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Re: ~KiSsInG In ThE RaIn~
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 01:59:52 PM AEST
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Hey Grrlfriend....although I was glad for 2 sunny days here to go in the pool, you have me wishing for some rain now....
(You know me.. once there's water..and love.... involved, I'm there!! ) lol..
Lovely write....I enjoyed it greatly..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: ~KiSsInG In ThE RaIn~
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by Tory on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 02:31:44 PM AEST
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| Very Good, I realy like this. |
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Re: ~KiSsInG In ThE RaIn~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 08:11:59 PM AEST
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| Excellent. |
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Re: ~KiSsInG In ThE RaIn~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 09:47:36 PM AEST
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Beautiful, provocative and enticing, Shel. I've always loved the rain.
Moreso, than sun, oddly enough. And who wouldn't with moments like this?
:P
Exquisite!
~ Breezy
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Re: ~KiSsInG In ThE RaIn~
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by emystar on
Thursday, 27th August 2009 @ 06:19:08 PM AEST
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Sounds like mucho fun. Beautifull.
smiles, huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: ~KiSsInG In ThE RaIn~
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 31st August 2009 @ 09:50:23 AM AEST
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beautifully romantic,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: ~KiSsInG In ThE RaIn~
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by windowguy on
Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 05:37:00 AM AEST
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That's the best distraction on a rainy day!
Good poem. |
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Re: ~KiSsInG In ThE RaIn~
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by wheelz1324 on
Monday, 26th October 2009 @ 06:08:45 PM AEST
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| amazing imagery and it amazes me in how such little words you create a whole story its really awesome |
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