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Beyond The Ghost
Contributed by
shelby
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Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 10:56:03 PM in AEST
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Gathering up glitter, crystaline shards of desperate tears
Hushed by many secrets that gathered, collected dust for years.
Only to wake their weary little heads
dancing in the shadows of the eves satin glow
casting shades of purple upon their wake.
Wafting motions, peaking emotions, hushed, filled the eve
though there is no decieving now, bleakness covered gleam.
The tiny whispering chills running along the spine.
The moonbeams set low, losing the light.
Somewhere between here and never, beyond the ghost.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2009-08-25 22:56:03]
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Re: Beyond The Ghost
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by ChenoaShiningwater on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 11:01:49 PM AEST
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Im not sure exactly what I liked most about this.The way it was delievered,as though in mournful breaths,the imagery(beautiful) or the individual creativity of the words to form a whole.Regardless...it all came together wonderfully and held me with every line.
The last line...still lingers.Great title too!
Awesome! |
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Re: Beyond The Ghost
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 01:10:10 AM AEST
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Very deep poem had to read a few times
very profound writing made my brain think which is always good
Great job |
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Re: Beyond The Ghost
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 08:14:21 PM AEST
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The nothingness, the void, the everything that it is, this is really cool.
Somewhere between here and never, beyond the ghost. My fave. |
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Re: Beyond The Ghost
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 09:40:08 PM AEST
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Wow Shell, there is some really impressive imagery in this. And
soft muted tones that cover the soul with emotion. This read almost
as if floating above the words while they were absorbed into the sub-
conscious. So light and blithe. Like a dance. But there is also a
feeling of skeletons in the closet with this write. It's airy presence
is quite deceiving. MOST enjoyable, hun.
*huge hugs*
~ Breezy
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Re: Beyond The Ghost
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st September 2009 @ 03:22:24 PM AEST
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exquisite,
hugs n' love nessa |
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