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Naturally
Contributed by
ChenoaShiningwater
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Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 10:49:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Wandering through the wildflowers,
with silent breath of memories
I note the dew on every blossom,
and cast my sighs into the breeze
The distant ocean seems to call me,
as her rolling waves are heard
Oh how I wish for feathered wings,
to fly freely with the birds
Beneath my naked feet,
but for the jewellery on my toes
I can feel the beautiful earth ,
from where her smiles grow
Shadows of the afternoon,
come play upon my skin
To touch upon the places,
where innocence has been
Rising from the very depths,
of my collective soul
Comes a feeling of tranquility,
new hope to make me whole
With fabricated skin now gone,
I move among the trees
Boundless in my nakedness,
dressed only of the breeze
Dark braids have now fallen,
to caress my shoulders bare
My body but a whisper,
as it wanders without care
~~my mountain home,where I used to live~
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ChenoaShiningwater
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Re: Naturally
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 11:02:48 PM AEST
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Geezzzzzzzz, I am now dreaming and so caught up and lost, in awe I am. You paint such beauty.
Michelle |
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Re: Naturally
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 12:44:16 AM AEST
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Okay, uh, like I wanna be there or something.
Anyway, yeah!!! |
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Re: Naturally
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by ChenoaShiningwater on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 12:52:48 AM AEST
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| *looks up n throws cushion* LMAO...thanks for the smile :P |
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Re: Naturally
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 01:13:15 AM AEST
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You have painted a beautiful picture with your selected words I could feel emotion
Great job |
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Re: Naturally
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 08:17:46 AM AEST
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A lovely piece, very vivid and emotional.
-Phil |
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Re: Naturally
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 04:45:17 PM AEST
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"The distant ocean seems to call me,
as her rolling waves are heard
Oh how I wish for feathered wings,
to fly freely with the birds"
I seem to have this dream when the ocean calls me... Great imagery, Chenoa.
Keep them coming...
Jenni
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Re: Naturally
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 04:09:05 AM AEST
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( smiles)
Roses at your feet
Larry |
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Re: Naturally
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th August 2009 @ 08:28:10 PM AEST
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this is so lovely, gentle and enchanting!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Naturally
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by windowguy on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 12:50:28 PM AEST
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| Can't help but have that 'feel-good' feeling whilst reading this. Well written. |
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