|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Gaze through the prismatic
Contributed by
batmankiller
on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 09:13:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
The moon hides surreptitiously in the sky.
The clouds shrouds all hope of it ever being seen.
Call for it, cry for it, there's no reply,
Even with a halcyon sky, the vision is far from clean.
Don't be fooled, don't be pulled into the hole of despair.
For what you see is never what's reality!
What you consider love becomes the source of your tears.
Oh! ?The eagle knows best, he escapes the looming brutality.
Still your face shows hope, unable to accept.
The impending truth is not the discovery of something new;
It is merely the return to the line you've myopically crept.
In your hand is not another, but your disappointment freshly brewed.
So the shadow at the end of the hall is no longer hidden,
But the clandestine is not forgotten or forgiven.
Copyright ©
batmankiller
... [
2009-08-25 21:13:34]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Gaze through the prismatic
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 10:59:51 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I love it just the way it is. It seems if we try to follow the rules of poetry writing something gets lost inside, least to me it does.
I say rip the clothes off and be a rebel pen on kiss the rules goodbye! This is a delight to read!
Hugs
Michelle |
|
|
Re: Gaze through the prismatic
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd September 2009 @ 12:02:52 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
truly beautiful,
hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
