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Everyday magick
Contributed by
spike
on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 03:29:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When my hands arc through the air
I see trails of silver, cosmic,
and as I speak,
gold stars lift from the words and
make a heaven of the room.
I move in sessions,
phases of Mother of Pearl
with laughter like staccato crystal;
and my gaze is a lure for the unwary,
a fire for the greedy.
Truth is, I have forgotten where
the seam of me ends and the magic begins;
where incantation is mere conversation,
and the sacred only prosaic.
So, I shall weave my spells
washing the dishes,
and sing songs of Creation
as I go about my everyday.
Copyright ©
spike
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2009-08-25 03:29:11]
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Re: Everyday magick
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by Loende on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 03:52:46 AM AEST
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I've always thought that magic surrounds
us. This is a lovely and uplifting piece. I
especially love the last stanza, since it
encompasses everything. It's a really
beautiful write. Thank you for sharing it
with us and for remembering the magic.
Be well,
~Loende |
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Re: Everyday magick
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by elle on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 05:42:38 AM AEST
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Re: Everyday magick
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 07:25:00 AM AEST
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WOW! it's been a while since I've read anything of yours and this was a less than subtle reminder of the quality you possess. Top-notch.
-Phil |
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Re: Everyday magick
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 02:06:00 PM AEST
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This poem excels with your talent as a poet, Sir Spike!!!
I love the way you have intertwined everyday life with that which is, the magic of life and that what surrounds us.
Dude, this is great!
Thank you,
Tim |
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Re: Everyday magick
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 10:31:25 PM AEST
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Ohhhhh I felt the magic swirling round me while reading this. You create pure magic each time you write and I love it!
The pic is awesome too!
Thanks for this! I really needed magic tonight my friend.
Hugs hugs hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Everyday magick
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by zenith66 on
Tuesday, 8th September 2009 @ 04:31:05 PM AEST
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O lord what a poem!! you have shown me you are a Wordsworth for sure!! you have taken the apparent mundane everyday and made it simply exquisite.
you paint a picture of what many of us don't do enough and take a look around us at the artistry, the design. and the beauty of it all!!
this is one of the most unique, intelligent t and entertaining poems I've ever laid eyes on.
absolutely brilliant work!! keep it! |
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Re: Everyday magick
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by EternitysLyre on
Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 11:58:07 PM AEST
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When I read a poem, and I get a chill, that's when I know I've read poetry. And my spine is still tinging from reading this piece. Masterfully done.
~EL
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