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a walking mistake
Contributed by
aidoman
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Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 01:22:38 AM in AEST
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You can only walk so far in your head,
before your back to the start,
wishing you had ran instead.
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aidoman
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2009-08-25 01:22:38]
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Re: a walking mistake
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 03:16:52 AM AEST
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| This is so true, I can relate to this. great poem! |
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Re: a walking mistake
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 06:14:20 AM AEST
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An unusually satisfying read. Me, I prefer the track over the destination, and grin at each step.
S. |
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Re: a walking mistake
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by ChenoaShiningwater on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 06:56:57 AM AEST
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lol...this is neat!
It made me think of running from demons in ones mind...very cool! |
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Re: a walking mistake
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 12:23:59 PM AEST
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Interesting metaphor. Making a mistake does make one wish to speed through
the fall out; that you had "ran" through it instead of walked. Living with decision
is sometimes the most difficult thing any one of us can do. But life continues
and we deal. Writing something like this is as much a therapy as anything.
Great post!
~ Breezy
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