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Its too late
Contributed by
jenniferstein2006
on
Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 09:16:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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you see my face everyday
smiling
laughing...
but looks are deceiving
looks are deceiving
i am not what i appear
i hope that you will never
see my tears
what i want
you can't give me
not now
not ever
its too late
"please....." you say
"give me one more chance!!!...."
but i can't
i won't
its too late
what you have done
cannot be repaired
don't you realize?
my feelings cannot be spared
its too late
its too late
no apology's
its too late
no regrets
its too late
no forgiveness
its just...too late
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jenniferstein2006
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2009-08-24 21:16:39]
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Re: Its too late
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by shelby on
Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 09:22:50 PM AEST
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Oh hun this is heart breaking, it is so sad when these things put us into a postion where we cannot trust and go back.
Written well as always...... I hope you are ok.
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Re: Its too late
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 03:19:06 AM AEST
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| This is an extremely powerful and emotional poem. Good job! |
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Re: Its too late
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by ChenoaShiningwater on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 07:01:56 AM AEST
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Tug o war in the heart...its not easy to make a decision like this,but yes sometimes...its just too late.
Worded perfectly!
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Re: Its too late
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 04:53:01 PM AEST
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Oh my, I admire the courage in this. Oh how I wish that bravery could be mine. So many
times I've let something carry on far too long because I wasn't brave enough. And then
we are condemned to live a life with the worst of emotions - indifference.
Sometimes it is too late. Sometimes it's just far too late. Excellent post.
Wonderfully written.
~ Breezy
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