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Divide a Nation
Contributed by
Xjordanary
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Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 07:53:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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Swords clash but never touch,
Divide a nation, more than much,
Have never seen the fall of man,
Untill near miss, that I can,
Relentless and the emotion,
A massacre of simple notion,
Ever again, will it be seen?
Ha!, if only, if never so keen,
So shall it happen but once more?
My friend, the key is already in the door...
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Xjordanary
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Re: Divide a Nation
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 08:00:50 PM AEST
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sadly theres always a war somewhere... this is written beautifully,
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Re: Divide a Nation
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by shelby on
Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 08:51:31 PM AEST
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I agree with Nessa,
it is a nice thought though, it would be nice for everyone to learn and not repeat.
Nicely written verse for a first post here.
Welcome to YPDC
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Re: Divide a Nation
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 10:54:41 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, much longer we cannot go
before it is all gone, war, a word that should
have been banned by the second century . . .
thank you for your read and comment,
welcom to ypdc . . .
Ben |
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Re: Divide a Nation
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by spud on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 09:15:46 AM AEST
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Hi
Well written - and finishes with ............... is it
Hope .... or Foreboding? Is it the door to Lunacy,
or an Awakening?
Let's hope they're listening. I'm with you on
reparation!
Tommy
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