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~Stormy Sea~
Contributed by
shelby
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Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 03:56:05 PM in AEST
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We joined again the other day
my soul sister and I.
The turbulent waters of soul
and of nature
simply, gently collide.
Swept away with the wind
and its bitter chill.
Tidal waves of emotional need
in which two souls need filled.
Ours is a generous emotion
of give, take, want and need.
Her mist and spray comforting
edd and flo of the heart, the sea.....
rushed thoughts......... there is more of this much more
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shelby
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2009-08-24 15:56:05]
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Re: ~Stormy Sea~
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by ChenoaShiningwater on
Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 04:41:56 PM AEST
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On a beautiful warm sunny day like it is here today,coupled with your write that soothed my senses even moreso...I am smiling inside.
I really like this,the flow and the imagery and the picture is lovely toO.
Nice!!
(and yes you do know me...LW) ;) |
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Re: ~Stormy Sea~
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 04:48:15 PM AEST
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very pretty, beautifully written,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: ~Stormy Sea~
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by Loende on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 03:38:38 AM AEST
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See, now...there we go. I LOVE the sea.
I love how it always seems to bring life out
of anyone who writes about her. You and
your soul sister...did you breathe? It sounds
like it. Lovely write, Michelle.
Love,
~d |
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Re: ~Stormy Sea~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 06:43:21 PM AEST
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I could almost feel the spray, taste the salty air and hear the roar of the waves
as they crash upon the sand. But I want to hear the "much more" of this, hun.
Those who get to live near water are the luckiest people of all. I'm with dawn.
I adore what comes out from the depths when people write of the sea.
Soul sister indeed! Impeccable writing, dearest.
*huge hugs*
~ Breezy
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