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my faith
Contributed by
rossdean
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Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 08:59:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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growing up i learnt my faith
watching old ladies pray, in their own way
then one by one then there were none
I often thought they knew they were done.
praying to the father and the son.
As i've got older, my faith has got colder
Too many losses, and too many crosses.
I pray still but nothing changes
One by One, too many rages
On not enough pages
and not enough familiar faces
Copyright ©
rossdean
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2009-08-24 08:59:44]
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Re: my faith
(User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 11:15:02 AM AEST
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This is powerful in a gentle way, i loved it,
so captivating, despair not, some times
even one who has it all can be in doubt,
your words are beautifully honest, as
well as compelling . . .
thank you likewise for your read
and your comment, i deeply appreciate it . . .
Ben |
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Re: my faith
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by PreciousKitten on
Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 01:35:50 PM AEST
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| i know the feeling. i understand the point of this poem u have been brave enough to post here. i understand |
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