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Let me go. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 08:31:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Let me go. . . go. . .
with my highest thought.
Let me go. . . drift. . .
as fragrance upon the morning air.
Let me go. . . let me. . .
(become) (whole).
Let me go. . . let the blush
of evening leave me as aware.
Let me go. . . beyond. . .
the mark I'd set for myself.
Let me go. . . amidst the dust. . .
& gather principals of care.
Let me go. . . let my path. . .
wind to those in need.
Let me go. . . transcend. . .
medioctric stare.
Let me go. . .go without. . .
regard. . . become a circle (ling).
Let me go. . . let me shine. . .
encircle light. . . reflect my share.
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-08-23 08:31:36]
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Re: Let me go. . .
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 12:30:39 PM AEST
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well woven words, a beautiful write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Let me go. . .
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 11:21:39 PM AEST
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I love this poem so much. It's uplifting and has a feeling of the person exhibiting strength, yet, at the same time, some angst. I also really like the way it reads...so...so, rhythmic.
Take care,
Tim
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Re: Let me go. . .
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th August 2009 @ 05:04:29 PM AEST
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elle, at first I thought this might be about someone trying to hold you back, but
after reading it through to the end, (thrice), I have a much different emotion when
I read it now. It is (as Tim stated) very uplifting and moving. I get the same feeling
reading your piece as I do listening to Josh Groban sing, "Let Me Fall". It's beautiful, hun.
~ Breezy
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Re: Let me go. . .
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by hetlerkh on
Saturday, 12th September 2009 @ 03:58:20 PM AEST
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so sweet poem ....
i like it so much ! |
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Re: Let me go. . .
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by ming on
Friday, 25th September 2009 @ 09:20:40 AM AEST
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| This is awesome (lack of a better word) Thanks Elle for inspiration and your artistic grace. |
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