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Echoes
Contributed by
ChenoaShiningwater
on
Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 07:00:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Those words I held as truths,the breath I never knew
Heights attained in heart,meditative on the blue
I had walked the mossy banks,with warm winds close behind
I knew the sun as she undressed the contours of my mind
Mountains from afar,their whispers brought a tear
Mere echoes of my love,rebounding soft but clear
Bare feet had touched the earth,gentle as they danced
Across the plains,new breath and I,spirits two romanced
Visions of crystal streams,juniper wild and free
Eagles painted the backdrop,I was finally me
Home within the comforts,a place I always dreamed
Upon the waters surface,love's reflection gleamed
Though the wind still calls me,from its mountain home
I'm aware across the plains,I now wander all alone
I will listen closely,my heart will always hear
Mere echoes of a love,that now rebound unclear
Copyright ©
ChenoaShiningwater
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2009-08-23 07:00:08]
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Re: Echoes
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by elle on
Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 07:56:40 AM AEST
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| Echoes of excellence. . . elle :) |
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Re: Echoes
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th August 2009 @ 12:50:43 AM AEST
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I have read three of your poems tonight and you have definitely got a nice flow going on. :-) You have some beautiful poetry and I'll be back to read some more.
Take care, and welcome to YPDC.
Tim |
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Re: Echoes
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 26th August 2009 @ 07:50:48 PM AEST
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Another beauty of a write here, my friend...
I cannot stress how glad I am that you are writing once more....
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