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Derrick

Contributed by Punkin92 on Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 11:26:37 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I cry and weep each day
Hoping you will see
And turn the other way
But you get pleasure
From my pain
Its just a measure
In this your vain
I ask for help
From all i know
Ive never dealt
With such a blow
I think i love you
But this is more
I feel your spirit
Pulling me through the door
I wish i could fight it
I wish i was strong
But you you like it
Makin me feel like i dont belong
I dont understand how
You can say your a man
Everyone knows your not
And now my life is in your hands
Ive never felt these feelings before
Ive never been put down and beaten
And then gone back for more
Why do you do this
Is this all a game
All i asked was bliss
And you had to blame
I wanted you 100%
You dont get that many times
But then you just sent
Me away like a chime
I wish i could know
What your thinking
When you hold me one night
But the next morning in blinking
Your all full of fright
I love you Derrick
Now let me be
Please let me go
Please let me be

Copyright © Punkin92 ... [ 2009-08-22 23:26:37]
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Re: Derrick (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyRose on Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 05:49:50 AM AEST
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I can relate to this......hope its not to late for you to find the strenght to fight for you first than the love you feel for this person......Its ok to love someone that doesnt seem like cares about it but be strong enough to love you completely first.....the wisdom will follow after that...

LadyRose

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