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Fight the snails!
Contributed by
Nico
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Friday, 21st August 2009 @ 11:30:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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She ran right from the garden shed
All the way upstairs to her comfy bed
Cried in the night
And dreamed of a fight
She knew she would fail
Against a dozen slimy snails
She screamed for her life
Which sounded like being stabbed with a knife
Jumped in the dark
Over what felt like an arc
She must be near home
And some people are afraid of a garden Gnome?
She found the footpath to her house
Where sat not a snail
But a little grey mouse
Who said to her
To close your eyes tight
Then believe you will wake up before sunlight
Copyright ©
Nico
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2009-08-21 11:30:19]
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Re: Fight the snails!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st August 2009 @ 01:55:12 PM AEST
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An interesting piece.
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Re: Fight the snails!
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 21st August 2009 @ 07:21:08 PM AEST
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Nicely written. The last stanza is an effective ending. Creative idea!
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