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Our Un Lucky night!
Contributed by
lowman613
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Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 06:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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MY Hubby played drums for this local band,
every time he played I gave him a hand,
We had fun,danced,sang & had a few,
as the night went on the crowd really grew,
But the night was doomed from begining to end,
when I could'nt get money out of the Atm,
But not to worry we borrowed some,
from family & friends that were sure to come,
As the night went on,
Nothing else went wrong,
Till we were packing up & leaving all the fun,
My Hubby found out our car was in a hit & run,
He was mad,he was ticked,
That our car had been hit,
We drove out of there,fast out of sight,
Me & Hubby got in a fight,
I told him it will be Ok,
He of course said "No Way",
Driving faster,I said "Slow Down",
In the rear view mirror,red & blue lights all around,
Oh My Gosh its a Cop,
I told you hun you better stop,
He explained to the man why we were driving
like we were,
everything now seems like a blur,
I surly thought we'd get a ticket than,
But I knew the cops son,Thank Heaven,
Because of that he let us go,
Our night out,was a blow,
What we thought was a unlucky day,
Ended up being lucky any way!
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2003-03-30 18:25:00]
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Re: Our Un Lucky night!
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 06:31:52 PM AEST
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good write ...at least you got out of the house.
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Re: Our Un Lucky night!
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 06:49:21 PM AEST
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| awww! picnic in the backyard next time?? |
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Re: Our Un Lucky night!
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by venkat on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 05:42:40 AM AEST
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| Hilarious..dear christina.. you attempt all types of subjects.. this is sooo beautiful I love this one . very pleasant to read it.... venkat |
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Re: Our Un Lucky night!
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by shelby on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 11:31:53 AM AEST
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This is a goodone!! Darn ATM anyway!! HEE HEE
Michelle |
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Re: Our Un Lucky night!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 10:20:04 PM AEST
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Enjoyed this a lot....thanks for sharing..
Jenni |
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