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Confetti of Leaves
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Thursday, 20th August 2009 @ 09:40:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Free-falling colours,
cascading bursts of nature,
carrying wishes
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
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2009-08-20 09:40:42]
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Re: Confetti of Leaves
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by elle on
Thursday, 20th August 2009 @ 01:00:07 PM AEST
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| methinks melikes. . . elle :) |
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Re: Confetti of Leaves
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 20th August 2009 @ 09:06:32 PM AEST
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Great imagery, Heidi... I love this..
One of my favs of yours...your best I think..
Jenni |
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Re: Confetti of Leaves
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th August 2009 @ 10:46:57 PM AEST
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| Aw, purty. :-) |
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Re: Confetti of Leaves
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by ChenoaShiningwater on
Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 05:43:28 AM AEST
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Simplistic beauty...you can't beat it *smiles*
Wonderful lil haiku |
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Re: Confetti of Leaves
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by kye on
Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 03:41:18 PM AEST
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The elegant way you said so very much with your Haiku poem is astounding.
I agree with the other comments, the imagery is gorgeous and I love the thought of "carrying wishes" --- come to think of it maybe, this could be a title for a new poem for you or the making of a new poem.
Awesome! I'm impressed.
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Re: Confetti of Leaves
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd August 2009 @ 05:29:58 PM AEST
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Great poem very expressive in so few words
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Re: Confetti of Leaves
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by windowguy on
Sunday, 23rd August 2009 @ 07:01:33 AM AEST
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| Great one. Like the connective symbolism of "confetti" and " carrying wishes". |
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