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Rain Play
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Tuesday, 18th August 2009 @ 08:32:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I stare up at the heavens as they begin to downpour;
everyone around me takes shelter from the rain.
I stand merrily in the dripping drops descending with thunder's roar;
Purifying rain cleanses my pains away and pours them down the drain.
Feeling the drops on my skin invigorates me,
reborn in mind, body and soul,
my skin glistens with newborn glee;
interacting with the rain brings peace to my soul.
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lesoleilnoire
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2009-08-18 20:32:16]
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Re: Rain Play
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th August 2009 @ 10:49:50 PM AEST
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I really like the imagery in this one. You put the reader there with you. Nicely done.
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Re: Rain Play
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th August 2009 @ 08:56:20 AM AEST
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Totally agree, I can't understand why people flee from the rain like they're allergic to it.
-Phil |
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Re: Rain Play
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by Dissolvedlines on
Thursday, 20th August 2009 @ 07:13:09 AM AEST
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| I really like the refreshing and cleansing feel of this piece...a very good read, Julian |
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Re: Rain Play
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by windowguy on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 01:05:25 PM AEST
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Nice emotive piece. Yes, something good can be felt by rain.
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