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what do they expect
Contributed by
spooky
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Tuesday, 18th August 2009 @ 03:12:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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to much to do, to little time to do it,
we want to do the best that we can,
in the shortest amount of time that we have,
we strive to make things right in others eye's,
family, friends,people we dont know,
we want to make things right,
pressure is put upon us,
hurry lets get it done they say,
to young, to old, whats the difference,
we push through life to be adults,
when we reach it
we wish that we were still young again,
working as hard as we can to accomplish
the things that we want,
we vote to make our lifes better,
ooops another one bit the dust,
life is hard for everyone,
we do what we can, the best way we can,
thats all we can do,
were not perfect in any way,
were only human,
we try thats all,
what do they expect of us
when times are hard
what do they expect of us
when we try to make things right
what do the expect !
craig s.meeks
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Re: what do they expect
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by orphani on
Tuesday, 18th August 2009 @ 05:17:34 PM AEST
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what do you expect from yourself
more to the point.
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Re: what do they expect
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 18th August 2009 @ 06:36:02 PM AEST
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Great piece. People push themselves too hard about insignificant things. You capture this idea nicely.
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Re: what do they expect
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by InfinitePoet on
Tuesday, 18th August 2009 @ 08:12:17 PM AEST
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BRAVO!! STANDING OVATION!!!
My State of life and way of living as of late has been diffucult ,just like so many others today!! Your poem couldn't of described any better how i'm feeling most of the time!!1 Thank You for letting your fellow poets out here know none of us are feeling this way alone!!!
Keep writing!!! Keep up the good work!!
Peace & HUgz
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Re: what do they expect
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st August 2009 @ 10:11:46 PM AEST
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I have been living a complete disaster so I relate to every single word. I say to hell with what everyone expects, it is hard enough right now to keep in mind what we each expect of ourselves without getting lost in a whirlwind of confusion. Hang in there my friend, good to see you posting!
Good work!
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