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My Camping Trip to Straddie
Contributed by
LilDream
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Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 03:25:00 PM in AEST
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We got up early and drove to the barge
We sat there and waited a while
We boarded the barge and had a smooth trip
Over to Straddie isle
When we drove through the sand dunes and set up camp
My friend and I styled with make-up
We went swimming down at the beach
The water was so cold it made us wake-up!
The next day we went to the freshwater holes
Later on we played a game of Fish
It was beginning to get dark so I had a shower
Then it started to rain, Oh for the sun I did wish!
We found lots of pippies on the beach
And Dad let me drive the car
We swam and we ate and had an ice cream
What a great holiday so far!
The campfire was fun, we sang lots of songs
And cooked our dinner with damper
I hope we go back to Straddie next year
Because we love our camping!
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Re: My Camping Trip to Straddie
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 03:34:38 PM AEST
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very good write, you have your mum's talent
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Re: My Camping Trip to Straddie
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 06:29:52 PM AEST
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| I agree with sharon! Well done my young friend!!! :o) |
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Re: My Camping Trip to Straddie
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 09:45:31 PM AEST
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You do have your moms talent !
Well done! Christina |
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Re: My Camping Trip to Straddie
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 09:48:46 PM AEST
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hard for me to believe you are nine years old, much talent within' you, you made me want to go camping! lol, but..what are 'pippies' and 'dampers'?
huggs kiddo keep writing! love nessa |
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Re: My Camping Trip to Straddie
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 12:34:56 AM AEST
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Pippies look like oyster shells - they are closed up but when you open them they have a little squishy animal inside like an oyster. My Dad gets them on the beach to use for bait when he is fishing.
Damper is an Australian bread made on a campfire made with flour and water and it looks like a cake - we have butter and honey or jam on it.
Thank you from LilDream
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Re: My Camping Trip to Straddie
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 10:24:40 PM AEST
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Wow...talent sure runs in the family!!!
Hugs,
Jenni |
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