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your toes,,,,and other assorted joys
Contributed by
orphani
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Monday, 17th August 2009 @ 05:22:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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there is not enough lifetime for me to know you......well enough
your toes alone would consume a thousand years
(and thats if we stay home from work)
your eyes must be the longest.........becouse,
each time i look--- i would soon find your mouth
and,,,, that journey has no end
only beggining.
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orphani
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2009-08-17 17:22:35]
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Re: your toes,,,,and other assorted joys
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by orphani on
Tuesday, 18th August 2009 @ 02:21:43 AM AEST
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line 3 should not be in this--i just had to do it
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Re: your toes,,,,and other assorted joys
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st August 2009 @ 10:22:28 PM AEST
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LOL I liked you line three note, hee hee.
I enjoyed the poem, as I said before love your work. You always have something creative and new to write about, awesome!
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