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Ethereal 2
Contributed by
fortunesdancer
on
Monday, 17th August 2009 @ 02:44:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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it runs with many rivers gazes on the stars
creator from oblivion of both jupiter and mars
it has awaken whilst you slumber be the envy of the fight
always wishing for something more than gracious subtle night
illuminating brightness and dazziling light
its content in disparit
but dispair when alll is well
knows his days are numbered but is gracious in defeat
and knows we are his final masterpeices
hes the the watcher in the moonlight
the dancer in the night
resist him you may but futile it is to fight
is all around but silent does not tell
served hi sentence
bound in hell
its danced on ice feilds under blissful moon
loved so many but never succumbed yto swoon
its danced the night away my love
like many a time we have
image of humbled holy sight
soft but powerful
straining might
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2009-08-17 02:44:36]
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Re: Ethereal 2
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by orphani on
Monday, 17th August 2009 @ 03:53:29 AM AEST
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i can say many great things about this
more to the point though i will venture the wrath of titens to say i saw some glimpses of a lesser sort.
humbly approached
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Re: Ethereal 2
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by PreciousKitten on
Monday, 17th August 2009 @ 10:34:14 AM AEST
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| this poem is very interesting as the poet. i like it very much. |
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